young life on fire
promise burned out too soon
scattered embers
linked to carpe diem; Ember
4JOY.........Beautiful and interesting things - visual, thoughtful, and (hopefully) poetic...
4JOY.........Beautiful and interesting things - visual, thoughtful, and (hopefully) poetic...
Powerful!
ReplyDeleteHow sad, young talent burning too bright to last. Bravo :)
ReplyDeleteA sad picture you've painted with your words...
ReplyDeleteEmbers
beautiful and sad
ReplyDeleteThis has a sad undertone to it .... well expressed :-)
ReplyDeleteWow! Joanne ... what a strong haiku you share here with us. This is really a haiku with a deeper meaning ... dreams scattered ... but a new day will rise.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful - in fact quite emotional..really good for that..
ReplyDeletePowerful haiku ~ great photo ~ hope all is well ~ Lovely weather, eh?
ReplyDeleteMy thoughts go to rock stars dying young. Very well captured
ReplyDeletea very sad -- tragic - yet very real haiku.
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